Lost

I'm feeling a little lost. Not sure why. I guess maybe Sorcha's critique cut me a little deeper than I thought.

I'm afraid to draw. I don't like to fail and I failed...

Perhaps I am just tired. I've been working my @$$ off here at the house playing housewife, and student, and mother. I'm just not getting a lot of help, and it's hard. I'm really tired.



I just finished reading a good book called Daughter of the Forest by Juliet Marillier. This was a great book. I will probably read the second book soon. Son of Shadows. These are books that I can read several times. They are that good. I felt inspired to draw reading certain parts.



I want to do a WoW fanart. However.. I can't seem to get motivated. I think it's because right now I don't like WoW. It's irritating when I can't play more than one day a week because of school, kids, and stuff.

So what do I draw now... The guy from cgsociety.org, said that I should focus more on fundamentals and not worry about technique so much now.

Gah, I felt like I knew a pretty good amount, and I just feel so stupid now. Wondering where I go to look and work on that....

The most amazing post...

On CGSociety.org I found a post that has just captivated me ALL DAY. I just finished reading and looking at 105 pages of it... lol.

 

I think I ended up saving around 452 files from it. This professional was offering to do paint overs for people. So he could show them how they composition could be better, with lighting and technique and all that.

It was started back in 2006. Wow.. my eyes hurt, and my head feels full..

 

I feel a little intimidated now but I hope I can get over that and start on Sorcha again.

 Here's the thread in case anyone else is interested.

Paint-Overs on CGSociety.org

It's nearly midnight here... I think I will crash. I'll start tomorrow after a good nights sleep..

Sorcha Redo...

So I decided... I am going to redo Sorcha.. yup.

I made so many errors in lighting, and clothing, and composition, I got some tips from Robert Chang on cgsociety.org.

Here's the thread.


Sorcha's Critique Thread on CGSociety.org

He hasn't responded to my "notes" yet. I'm gonna post them here too.

These are all the notes about the alterations I am going to make on her.

Whew. I think I have my work cut out for me!

Sorcha's Critique!

So I posted Sorcha on cgsociety.org to be critiqued. A gentleman named Robert Chang critiqued me! Yey! It was nice to see some really solid points on where my weaknesses are. I had an idea of what they were... but honestly.. I didn't realize I was so wrong! I guess that's the way it works!



Here is what he said...

Instead of looking for tutorials that demonstrate the technical stuff, you really should be studying the foundational knowledge instead--things like composition, perspective, lighting/values, color theory, anatomy/figure, clothing folds...etc. The technical stuff is a piece of cake compared to the critical foundations, and if your foundations are solid, it only takes a very short amount of time to become proficient technically.

Compositionally, this is probably a bit loose and could be tightened up a bit by making it a portrait aspect ratio instead of square. The scene itself doesn't really need the extra space horizontally.

She is fairly attractive and her proportions are pretty good, so that's plus.

The lighting is incoherent because you have your main light source back-lighting the subject, yet, the subject is very bright in the front, as if there's another bright light source in front of her. To make the problem worse, that unexplained light source apears to be very diffused and coming from all directions, as if she's in a photography studio with a bunch of photography lights all going off as once. In order to make your scenes credible and authentic, you must first decide on exactly what your light sources are and then stick to it.

She should have a clear rim light on her from the moon, but the rest of her should be much darker, pretty much a silhouette. If you want to illuminate her from the front, then you need to think of a credible light source--perhaps a torch light, a bonfire, or even magical light--anything but a nondescript diffused light.

Her hair looks too stuff, like dried hay. Taper your lines when you paint hair strands. Set your pen to vary brush size by pen pressure, and then practice drawing tapered lines--it makes all the difference in the world.

Her clothing doesn't look credible because the lack of folds and wrinkles show you don't know how to depict natural looking folds and wrinkles, but by skipping them, the clothing looks over simplified in contrast to the details we see in the rest of her.

This is one of the obvious drawbacks of using photo references as a crutch--whatever isn't in the photo reference, you have a hard time painting out of your head, and it always looks less realistic/detailed/natural than the parts that did use photo reference.

The ocean looks too vague. The ripples and waves when backlit like that are actually very contrasty. Even if there's fog/mist, it still wouldn't look so smudgy. Instead, you should paint a contrasty ocean, then put a layer of fog/mist over it, instead just painting the ocean really vague and smudgy.

 He is totally right! Totally! 

At first I was like in my head.. "WOW I'M SO HORRIBLE.. OH MY GOD. WHY AM I DOING THIS?!" and then I realized that I was being a drama queen.

 

Took some breaths, and then re-read it looking at it from a different perspective. Haha. Had my husband read it too.


So... should I shelve this or redo it?